False
Alarm
By M. E. Wood
Silken noses twitch a dance
to the scents of spring.
Sunlight fingers caress
shadowed corners, alerting.
Furry
bundles arouse,
venture out of dark corners
in search of unexpected delights.
What’s all this white stuff?
*published
in Sol Magazine
/ April 2003
COMMENTS:
Impish lines with marvelously touch-feel words such as "silken
noses" and "furry bundles." Nice image of the
pervasiveness of Spring, leaking into each corner with "sunlight
fingers," to waken the world, bringing out the "furry
bundles." The real laugh comes in the final line, when
one realizes that just because Spring is here does not always
mean the snow is gone - a lovely coup de grace to this song
of awakening (and realization).
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