Shape
Shifter
By M. E. Wood
Snow dappled trees lean from the weight
Huskies travel with a speedy gait
Crystallized lakes creek and crack
No beast takes the time to look back
Nature
blazes a plan of its own
Duration and character are never known.
Winter sleep conceals the land,
A forced rest from a sometimes bitter hand.
*published
in Sol Magazine
/ January 2003
COMMENTS:
Great rhyme. Nice encompassing of every aspect of nature,
from the trees to the dogs to the lakes and land itself. Interesting
analogy of winter to a roaring fire advancing on the land
where "no beast takes the time to look back," for
the two are equal in unpredictability. Excellent closing lines.
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