Silent
Screams
By M. E. Wood
scarred
hands
heroic attempts
a lasting reminder
burns fade
medals tarnish
memories live on
*published
in Sol Magazine
/ September 2002
First Place: Trauma Contest
COMMENTS:
Does a very good job of matching rhythm precisely in first
lines of both verses. Avoids being overly sentimental; understatement
interestingly juxtapositioned with content. The images of
silent screams, scarred hands and lasting memories serve to
redefine each in terms of the other. This poet has summed
up a national tragedy in six lines and gently reminded us
that medals tarnish but memories live on. A beautiful double
trio.
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